Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Rough Draft

Comparison Paper
October 20, 2009
English 1101

In life we make decisions using both are mind and conscious. Both are a reliable decision maker, but one is more of reality check, while the other is an personal decision. It depends on what the person values most on whether they use their mind or conscious.

The mind, our Brain, probably the most reliable organ we have. Without it we lose our senses entirely. It is the most important to some , but when it comes to making decisions it is our book smart reasoning. We base it on what we know, Not what we feel. When you make a decision in life like whether or not to go to school or just start a job right away, you would use your mind way of thinking if it is just another step in life, but if it is something you have always dreamt about then that is when your conscious comes in.

Your Conscious, it is theoretically there, but not an actual thing, except almost all use it when it comes done to making decisions. If you have an conscious, because some are cold and heartless and only think about their self, and a conscious in not there. Most have one though, and it is their emotional decider. It is the heart over mind motto. If you are making a decision based on emotional attachment then your conscious is your way of thinking, or if you have done something bad, your conscious is what makes your feel bad and to apologize. Conscious way of deciding is only for the young at heart, not the mind thinker.

All in all both ways of reasoning are efficient but one is based on your heart not your brain and when i say"heart" i mean the emotional rapture that is held within yourself. The other is what is the technical way of thinking, like what i said in the beginning, the "reality check". Whether you use one or the other is not of importance, but as long as you are true to yourself the right decision will come to you and the rest will fall in to place.

3 comments:

  1. Your introduction and thesis is very clear. The conclusion is very good. This draws me in and makes me wonder how I am.

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  2. As far as your organization, your examples could be explained more in detail and there could be different options used, the ones you used were good, you just need to go more in depth about what you are trying to say to your audience.

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  3. Your examples are clearly stated but need more explaining. I enjoyed the essay after i got done reading it, it made me think about what I'll do next time I have to make a decision. The essay is an interesting one. Good job.

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